Score: 10

"Great - but...."

submission: Waterlollies

date: August 10, 2008

I enjoyed all of the animations in brackenwood, so I read your interview, with Dan Paladin. Anyway I heard you wanted it to become a family favroiute or something like that, and if you want to reach that goal I suggest you tone down the violence slightly, I agree it's funny and entertaining, but it won't become a family favourite like that I expect. You may compare it to one of Grims fairy tales, but the main diffrence is that every creature Bitey encounters he fights, within Grims fairy tales there's normally some kind of deciet or whatever. I'm gueesing your trying to make your animations and stories similar to Grim's anyway... Hope you found this advice helpful.

BTW this was meant to be a PM but you only accept them from contacts and I figured this was kind of like a review..

Score: 10

"Pepi Le Pou"

submission: There She Is!! step3

date: June 19, 2008

this seems very much like Pepi Le Pou, did it inspire you? it was about a cat which knocked over a paint can and so looked like a skunk, another skunk fell in love with her and follwed her like that. It was still a very good cartoon though even if not original

Score: 6

"good game"

submission: Wooglings

date: June 6, 2008

It was quite a good game but it was dissaponting that it was just 4 levels. to the unobservent reviewers it had a clear massage "every person has a part in a community" that was the whole point of the game

Score: 10

"Well done"

submission: crossroads in the sky

date: May 31, 2008

well done, this realy shows a fraction of the beauty of nature, it follows it's rules, the albatros flies and rests only to mate alone, they spend all thier time with the wind, the sea, the sky . Living a slow life where they just want to contitnue away from change. This contrasts with the seagul who must rely of others for scavenging and survival so thier brought into small locations with many seagulls which make them groups. As to wether an albortrous and a seagull can commune i'm not so sure, as far as i know the albotrous hardly ever speaks but theuy both belong to the same spiecies so they should be able to commune i guees.

Score: 5

"i think you'd be better of using the audio partal"

submission: Will Ryan on da keyboard!

date: May 28, 2008

it's just music compacted into one flash so you might as well submit it there into the audio partal where the music shall be assesed not the music

presentation (6/10)
flash (2/10)
music (8/10)

overall (5/10)

And also to all revievers when sumbmitting a flash it tells asks "is this a movie or a game/interactive" i believe it qaulifies as a interactive because it's definitely not a movie.

also authors do not have any control whatsoever over which collections thier works belong in, thats controlled by peolple like YOU reccomending it to be placed there (and partially moderators)

Score: 8

"nice tut"

submission: Lightsaber Tut. Pro 2.0

date: May 16, 2008

nice tut, short and to the point instead of taking ages like all the other LS tuts, omg the last review on this was in 2006....

Score: 10

"chainsaw massacre!"

submission: The Last Stand 2

date: May 16, 2008

lol, the zombies tore down my barricade so i went on a chainsaw massacre, they got me though :'( you should amplify headshots because while aimming the bullets fly above the cursor when you miss making headshots quite hard, i don't know if it kills them quicker but there heads still explode.... the dogs are evil, u can't c them....

Score: 10

"nice"

submission: Oxygen

date: May 15, 2008

liked all of it especialy the music, heard it on tri-achnid 1st....

Score: 10

"original..."

submission: Noodles on my Back

date: May 15, 2008

lol, very original....

Score: 7

"rly rly confused"

submission: Bad Baby

date: May 10, 2008

hmm.... good animation, but wiered story: a babie gets killed, gets resurected and going on drugs? well high score 'cos animation was gd at least